3 minutes is all I had to make it from this train, which was still slowly approaching the station, up some stairs, up some more stairs, through a turnstile, down some stairs, and onto what I assumed would, by that time, be a moving train. The lumbering locomotive screeched to a halt, the sound mimicking my own agony, as it reached the platform. I secured my bag with the strap set across my body, if it was to go down there was no going back to pick it up. I tightened my grip around the three and a half foot golf umbrella I was carrying. It had seemed like a brilliant idea when I left the office for the pouring rain but now it was just going to slow me down.
I clearly was not alone. The man next to me stared out the window, a
look of unadulterated determination in his eye.
I pointed out his loose shoelace and with a silent but thankful nod he
addressed the issue. The woman behind
watched intently, worried this man would not tie his laces by the
time the doors opened.
After what seemed like hours but was
merely seconds the doors opened. Like
thoroughbred racehorses bounding forward after the gun, crowds of commuters
rushed the doors to the stairwells.
Raincoats left unbuttoned were flowing in the wind with a majesty not
unlike that of the Caped Crusader heading heroically to battle.
We hit the stairs. The few who made it to the escalators
gracefully ascended upwards as those of us relegated to the stairs were putting
two, even three, steps behind us in a single stride.
With both flights of stairs cleared
people began fumbling for their tickets, a rookie mistake made by a surprising
number of veterans. I had drawn mine
before I even stepped off the train onto the platform. I weaved through the crowd doing my best (but
not completely succeeding) to avoid injuring anyone with my oversized umbrella
as I blew by.
Up ahead I hear the call of John Law,
“Sir, no open containers in the station.
That has to go in the trash before you can pass through the gates.” This wasn’t for me but for the very man whose
askew lace I had pointed out what seemed now to be days ago. I watched the man, without breaking stride, toss a half full Heineken 10 feet to the nearest trash bin. Time froze, the shot was destined for the
mouth of the bin.
Except, it wasn’t, the half-full can
struck the side with a loud thud.
The officer called to the man, yelling at him to pick up the can but it
was too late. He was already
halfway down his second flight of stairs and I was right behind him.
The platform finally came into view
at the bottom of the stairs, and there it was.
I was going to make it. The train
was still there. I darted through the
first open door I saw as a teardrop rolled gently down my cheek. I couldn’t believe my luck, not only had I
made it onto the train but there was a seat. I gave a small nod to the man with the disobedient laces and a quick glance out the
window in a moment of silence for those who hadn't made it, those who had fallen victim to the wonderfully
mind-numbing monotony that is the daily commute.
I think you're right that the writing was clearer here than in some other posts, and I really liked it. These are all great snapshot-type stories, and I get a real feel for the humor and situations, being someone who's spent a decent bit of time in cities with subways. You do a good job of drawing me back into the mindset. It's a unique kind of battle. Here's to our fallen comrades, and to more posts that are fun to read like this one!
ReplyDeleteI think the theme could use some work, there's a lot of flat space, could use an about section in the top right or something? Who knows. Not me.